we had to make a poem for our english class today using subordinating conjunctions. gotta love that grammar, eh? the first four lines in each five line stanza had to begin with one of the subordinating conjunctions but the fifth line could not. there was no specific pattern we had to follow. no rhymes required. no certain beat or rhythm. just poetry. so, here is mine. i guess i just wanted to display it. i don't have a title yet and it's due tomorrow. i really want one so i'll have to come up with something dumb. anyway, here it is =]
When I look up to watch the birds fly,
So high up in the sky,
After I feel a lump grow in my throat,
As I bury my face in my coat,
I feel the warm stream of tears as I cry.
Although I cannot live my dream,
When I think of you, it makes my heart scream,
Because of passion; I am so full of it,
So I shall dig myself out of this depressive pit,
Your love makes my soul beam.
i don't write poetry at all you guys. only when it's by school assignment. however, i do enjoy writing it. i just hope it's good and not shit. *shrugs* =]
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i liked that. totally trumps mine.
i really liked devan's too. i want to slap mrs coats for telling her richard and dani to drop the class.
oh my god oh my god.
that is probably the best thing i've seen. ever.
i remember all the tv shows, except i wish they would've said something about the slime shows on nickelodeon, and i thought nobody remembered captain planet!!! also all the food and the trendy phrases and even the rainbow fish at the library. and snap bracelets! omg. the nineties. good times. even for us '93ers. =]
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